PREM OIB essays feedback

Capucine’s stellar OIB essay

Check out Capucine’s essay for an incredible example!!!

Thel Mina O

Thel Mina does a really great job of always linking what is happening in the language/devices/style/what the author is “doing” to her thematic argument (how the language choices enhance a point, develop a theme — she always links language to meaning).

 

General comments:

Make sure your thesis and your essay refer to the main concepts asked of you in the question (and reguarly link back to these concepts/ remind us of the the main goal + point of  your argument)

Try to lengthen your essays a little more 🙂

 

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